Friday 26 November 2010

Evaluation and Feedback of the video


QUESTION ONE: In what ways does your video use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
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Here is the link to my powerpoint that is based on this question:
https://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B7qMb6ynzP5WMjQzMGNjNjMtYWRiYy00NjYxLTljZWEtM2E3NTJmNWI5ZjBi&hl=en_GB

Here is the link to me presenting my powerpoint on this question:
https://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B4OiJle5u6-iNDRmMWY4YTctNzcyOC00M2VmLTlmZTctYWZlMzQwNDEwMTc5&hl=en


QUESTION TWO: How effective is the

combination of your main product and ancillary texts?

The promotional pack


Texts/Fonts:


The digipak and advert used the same font, this is important as being consistent throughout both projects, are to help recognize the artist, as by using the same font becomes part of the artist’s trademark.


My font


Actual Ellie Goulding font


From the images above you can clearly see that the same fonts are used. I chose the fonts from dafont.com, as they had a wider range than Microsoft Word; they are similar to the type of font Ellie Goulding uses as her trademark font. I chose to use sans serif for the two projects as they are for entertainment purposes and are to be shown in an informal matter. So the fonts now replicate this. The font of the second image is on the digipak, it is smaller as project has a smaller life size than the advert. Comparing my promotional pack with an existing product the fonts are very similar except for the Ellie Goulding font the lettering has a glowing and highlighted effect around the edges. The Ellie Goulding font is successful as it is informal sans serif lettering, that is associated with the artist.


Images:



The cover image that I chose for my advert , I decided to use a close up to show the artist is facing and able to catch the eye of the main female target audience aged 16-24. Also the woodland background insinuates that it is associated with where the artist likes to portray her music videos. Similarly in the digipak cover image a close up shot is used to display that the artist is focused on the camera, by showing an intriguing interest in the surroundings. These images are successful as they really establish the style of music the artist produces through the mise-en-scene.








These images can be applied to the images used on two existing Ellie Goulding album covers, as in the first image which is used on the album Lights. The image also uses a close up shot; it is similar to the digipak image as the character is facing just away from the camera with a focused face expression. In contrast the images used in the existing product are successful as they are unusual towards basic close ups, as gives the idea the artist is unique and likes to stand out.


Same Person Consistency:


On the digipak and advert it is key that I have used the same person to featured in the two packages, this is important to give the promotional packs consistent and follow on, especially for the target audience they need to recognise the artist, so they could gain and interest in their musical style and fashion. Also this will make the two packs more coherent. This is very similar to the Ellie Goulding album covers; the artist is featured in both shots to establish who the artist is especially if they are not well known. For example the album cover image for Lights the shot has been used by Nike as Ellie Goulding represented a Nike project, in which she became very involved and help sell a product, so this was good publicity to make her as an artist more established.


Colour/Costume:


In terms of colour the same shade of gold is used on the font, in the promotional items, as in Photoshop, I used the colour matching tool, so the colour is able to stay consistent. On the advert only limited colours are used which are gold, black, red, green and blue, this is important to stick to a limit because the audience was to be able to read an advert without being blinded by the novelty of the multiple colours. This is slightly similar to the Ellie Goulding album cover as it sticks to the one colour which is gold, the colour has only be changed but adjusted the brightness of that colour. An improvement I could of made when to mimicking the style of Ellie Goulding of been to stick to only two colours possibly to have a more effective promotional pack.


In the advert Ellie Goulding is seen wrapped up in a parker jacket and scarf as the time of year the music video is being shot is in the winter therefore it is cold. In Ellie Goulding's video Your Song she is also seen wearing a scarf, this is important as this shows I have kept to the costume style of the artist, to be consistent. So the costume choice for the photo shoot was successful as kept to the artist's style, apart from there was a slight alteration to the outfit, due to the wintry weather conditions, the jacket was needed.











QUESTION THREE: What have you learned from your audience feedback?
https://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B7Y3Q612hgf4ZDA2YzI0ZGEtZTJhNy00NDU5LWI0ZDYtNTQxYmI1NmI3NTlk&hl=en


QUESTION FOUR: How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages of all your products?


Here is the link to my Powerpoint that answers question 4:


Finished Video

Here is the almost finished version of 'I'll Hold My Breath', it still needs to be slightly adjusted but this is the video I used to gain feedback on YouTube and Facebook http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CTycXjfRkw Here is the final version for my Ellie Goulding music video 'I'll Hold My Breath': http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GKz4u29v_b8

Creative Camera Use

https://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B7qMb6ynzP5WNmRlZDA2MmMtNWE5NS00NzQ3LWI2YzAtNDI0ZTY0OGRmYzY4&hl=en_GB

On the movie the creative camera starts at 1:13 and ends at 2:03. The first camera shot was creative as the person walked towards the frame and glistened in the sunshine this was conveyed as creative, as the shot was on the action and was finished in a natural way. The next shot is a long shot of the character walking towards the camera, it is creative as the character dissapear into the sunlight, and gives the sense the sunlight is making the character dissapear, as in a dream objects dissapear. Another shot was a establishing shot of Seaford Head cliff, the shot was creative as the camera was moving with a upwards tilt action, this gave the effect the shot was effective as the people in the scene looked entirely natural. The next shot that was used was a establishing shot of the sea, this was creative as the sea dissapeared into the glistening of the sunlight reflected on the sea. Also the shot was moving with a pan which was from a left to right angle. Another shot was a close up of the character singing on the beach, it is creative as the character's hair blowing in the wind is very natural and it looks professional as some directors use fans to create this effect. Lastly another way the camera is creative is by using a extreme close up of the character's lips while singing. The shot was effective as the timing was perfect, and the look of the shot looks professional as the camera is held very steady.

Rejected Footage

https://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B7qMb6ynzP5WNmRlZDA2MmMtNWE5NS00NzQ3LWI2YzAtNDI0ZTY0OGRmYzY4&hl=en_GB



Here I have some footage from my music video, it features some video clips, which I are not going to be in my music video. The first clip I decided to decline, was the two dancers failed to follow the chreography and ended up laughing, this is why I decided against it as it would look unprofessional in the video, as it would not flow with the rest of it. The second scene I rejected was that the dancers were just standing still, this is what not was needed for this shot, they needed to dance and follow the chreography. The next scene was rejected as the camera work was very shaky, this was inappropriate as the camera needed to be steady and be in time following the character. The scene set with the character performing on the swings, there was a white mark on the camera lense this effected the quality of the work so this was unable to use. The next scene was a take as the sea came in too quickly and Jess started laughing as she ran away from the sea. The scene down the swings was like an outtake shot, where Jess did not realise the camera was recording there and starting talking to the camera, so this was not part of the script.

Advert


I have decided to analyse Kings of Leon's Only by the night advert as I think that the advert is different to other adverts I have viewed. The font that is used on the band's name and title of the track is very robotic as it is uses serif lettering. Also by using the underscore to separate each word makes the writing stand out. I like the basic colour scheme that is used as only red and different shades of green are used. By using the different shades of green it shows the level brightness in which on the advert it is quite dull and dark. The image that is used is interesting as it is a mixture of two images placed into one. The image of the owl mixed in with the images of the Kings of Leon members, seems surreal. I think this would have an impact on the audience as the image is surreal and usual. So the usualness could appeal to the audience and persuade them to be interested in King's of Leon's style of music. The genre of this band is alternative rock, so I thought this could give me some inspiration to use the basic colour scheme, also to use an interesting image in my advert, as I am using Ellie Goulding to do my advert the genre is folktonica which is an alternative style of music.


Also I am analyse a second avert, I chose Katy Perry as the advert itself, caught my attention as it is so bright and colourful. The font used on the artist's name is significant because it is used on other advertisements, it the artist's trademark font. This could be useful as I could apply this and use the same font on my own digipak and advert. The smaller font is used well as it is clear to read and understand, this is important, as important detail is being provided. The advert uses many bright colours, the red and pink on the shirt worn by Katy Perry suggests that she has a bright and colourful personality, this could replicate what she is like as an artist. The range of colours work well and do not clash, this shows that careful consideration has been taken into account to prepare the advert. The white fence in the background suggests perfection as a white picket fence is always shown in a ''dream world'', hinting the artist acts artificial. I am not keen on the smaller image of the album cover, as it is hard to distinguish on a page that is multicoloured, although it is promoting the album as well as the track. I could can gain inspiration from this advert as the genre is pop and in Ellie Goulding's music there are slight influences of pop used. So I could photo shop to edit the images, to seem slightly surreal but related to the artist.So in conclusion I could stick to a basic colour scheme but use images that will be surreal and interest the audience.

The target audience of Ellie Goulding is important, the advert needs to appeal to them. If they see a Ellie Goulding advertisement they want to see something that is quirky, something typical that represents her as an artist. It also needs to feature, the important details, so that her fans are able to access to when the single is released. The advert could be advertised in many places, as her target audience is bewteen 16 and 45. Places could include Ellie's website, music magazines, posters in local places in interest to where her fans might be able to see the poster, also via Twitter, Facebook and MySpace.


I decided to used a close up shot of the artist as I think it will show the emotion of the artist, into how much her music means to her. The facial expression is meant to be natural, unfortunately I am unable to draw lips and show this, but the image on the actual advert will. I chose a sans serif font as this is associated with the artist, also is the colour. I like that the background stands out, as it gives a real sense of the theme of album, and possible locations music videos might be shot. The key information about the album, I like it is positioned under the artist's name, as it is still large enough to read, I decided against this advert as I felt that there was no enough details about the album.


For this flatplan, I made it similar to the flatplan that is above, as I really think that the image and the background has potential to work for an advert. I think the close up shot, which engage well with the audience, as the artist is looking straight forward. Also I like the background as it reflects, where the artist is most natural as gives a sense of where a music video would take place. I think that the information written in pencil, is positioned well, as it is easy to read and does not draw too much attention away from the main image, which is the focus of the advert. Overall I have chosen to use this design for my advert as I feel it has the potential to be edited to being the most professional and best reflects the artist.


I like this design as the background plays a large part of the advert, it is interesting, as normally on adverts, the focus on the artist would be a close up shot to catch the eye of the audience. The position of the artist, is good as it is placed in the centre and will still attract enough attention. I think the 'Ellie Goulding' font is slightly too large for this advert, as it seems that it is not necessary to be this large. However I like the colourscheme as it sticks to a limited amount of colours. The only problem I have with this flatplan is that I think there is more information, than image, in which I think that the image should slightly hold more of a focus. Also I think the size of the artist is too small to attract the audience, as they might miss the point of the advert and unable to recognise artist.

Here is my final advert



Evaluation
The image I decided to use is similar to the one in the digipak, I decided this as I thought keeping the same theme will link the two projects together, also the person is facing towards the camera and will draw attention to the female audience. I think having a black background is effective as the colours contrasting against it are effective as the colours stand out and easy to read. Giving information on some tracks that are featured will attract the female audience as they are the artist's most recognisable tracks, so this will persuade them to purchase the album.Using sans serif font on 'ELLIE GOULDING' is good as its eye catching and less serious looking then structured serif lettering. I decided to contrast gold and white as they are both light colours and show they are unique, such as the Polydor logo is white to show it is a trademark company. Whereas gold font was used for the website as it is associated with Ellie Goulding which is seperate trademark, as that colour is part of her trademark. A slight problem I found was that contrasting the white scarf against some of the lettering was difficult. I tried to edit the hue, brightness and contrast but this had no effect, so this could be a lesson learnt when trying to improve the advert.


Feedback
For the feedback that I received from Facebook the colour of the red and white font work well with each other, as somebody said it reflects well against the black background, it really stands out. I have received positive feedback from changing the colour of the grass to sepia, it makes the advert look more professional and effective. Using the gold font is good as it links to the digipak as the same colour is used, also the colour plays subtlety against her name 'goulding'. The suggestions to improve it is not to disorientate 'Ellie' as it does not quite match the surname and fix the white line in the image.

Digipack

A promo pack is all of the material that is used to promote the artists album and song, so this will include some publicity such as advertisements, posters that could feature in a music magazine, radio adverts. A digipack is a DVD sized package which is made out of cardboard, that a CD would fit as this would be the artist's album. The digipak is useful towards the artist as it will help promote the future releases that the artist will release. The digipak will be highly linked to the music video of the single that is being promoted, as the shots that will be shown, will be taken directly from the music video, this is good, as it shows the theme the artist has decided to take with this track, also gives the audience a preview of what will be featured in the music video, before it is released, if the audience has not already seen the music video.



A suitable digipak to analyse Madonna's Magic as it is a slightly similar genre to Ellie Goulding. Unfortunately I was unable to get hold of a digipak that was in Ellie Goulding's genre which is Folktronica, as digipak's are not a popular choice to advertise a artist's song, so there was a limited choice to choose from. The colours that are used in this pack are quite natural, as the pinks blend in well with the golden colours, which feature in the hay, the light pink colour is used to attract the audience to the pack as it is featured on a cowboy's hat, this is interesting to a Madonna fan, as this shows Madonna has taken a new direction with a music as it could interest a country type audience. I am not keen on the rainbow stripe on the front cover of the pack, as it does not suit the rest of the digipak. The camera shots that have been taken are close ups of the main character and the prop, this is to show the detail in the shot, to show the audience that what theme is featured for this digipak. I think the font is used on 'Music' is good, as it is a typical font that is associated with the cowboy country theme, also the colour matches other parts of the digipak so this is good, that only a few colours are used to keep it more simple. Also the font that is used on the back of the pack, which is described as a small description of the producers of the album, the white font contrasts well with the busy background that is golden brown. The bar code is situated in the bottom left hand corner on the back of the digipak, I feel this place stands out too much, as needs to be less noticeable otherwise, the more important information on the album may not be as noticeable. On the spine of the digipak, I think that the font is suitable, I am not very impressed with the rainbow background colour, also I think the image of the star looks tacky, as does not look very professional, and does not suit the essence that is conveyed on the digipak. This digipak can be useful to my own digipak as it has given me the idea, of how to promote different aspects, and use the genre, as a possible idea, of how different images are presented.



Another digipak I thought suitable to analyse is Moby's - Live. Moby shares a slightly similar style of music to Ellie Goulding as they are both slightly a electropop act. Also I am impressed with how the colour scheme is used on the Moby digipak as the colours, is a mixture of light and dark tones, of brown and black, I think this is good, as it looks more professional, as really makes the images, look more interesting for the audience. The shots that have been taken are a mixture of long and medium shots, they are used to show the artist performing live music, also to show a live audience, that has been taken from the music video. This style showing images, from the artist playing a live performance as part of the video is good, as it shows off the artist's talent, and that have more talents. The white font that is used on the back of the digipak contrasts well with the darker background, this is good, as the font is noticeable and the audience is more likely to be interested in reading the information. I like the presentation of the front of the pack as the simple font that is basic but memorable, therefore it stands out. The image that is used on the back of the pack, has been cleverly taken, as the shadow, has been cleverly formulated so the track listing on the album can be positioned. The image uses a long shot, as it shows all of the artist this is good as it also shows the background surrounding the artist, which is the artist in his natural environment playing a gig. The spine is white and plain, with no information on it. It is good as it looks professional and quite clinical, this can also be a problem as if you are trying to find this digipak in a shop or with other digipaks, it will be harder to find as it does not say the artist or the album name. I think I can gain some inspiration from this digipak, with using simple fonts, and sticking to a few colours, for the colour scheme, otherwise, it will not stick to the genre of music which is folktronica.



On the back page of this flat plan I decided to list the tracks that are featured on Ellie Goulding's latest album Bright Lights as the track that I will be using in featured on there. I decided not to use this back page as I am not keen featuring the artist's name on the back in large bold, letters I feel I want to keep the back page simple. Also I am not keen on the position of the bar code. The front image I decided to use a close up shot of the artist to show emotion to suggest that the artist is passionate about her music, also the 'big' hair it used to show that the artist is standing on some cliffs and looking 'windswept'. I chose not to use this design for my front cover as I unsure if I like the font been distracted with the really wavy hair I would want it to stand out. The inside cover image I like the idea of the character sitting in a middle of a field as it is very natural, also the track has been connoted from being in a dream, so being outside in a open space is quite dream like, this is why I have chosen to use it for my inside image. For the CD background image, I used an idea of a image of the back of Ellie Goulding's head I chose it because I just thought it would be different, but decided against it as it does not really fit in.







The back page is almost the same as the other flat plan except for moving the bar code at the top of the page. I decided not to use this page as I thought the bar code looked stupid at the top. The cover image I chose is also a close up like the previous flat plan, the only difference is that the font is at the top of the page, I prefer the font there as it is a lot clearer to read. I decided against this design as I thought the font would look better central, also not keen on the artist have wavy hair in the main image. The inside image is quite a simple shot, I decided not to chose this image, as it would be difficult to take images, in front of a couple of trees, also not very imaginative. The CD image, with the font surrounding the font, I like this idea as it is a simple and clearly shows who the artist, also I chose this idea as a image would be pointless as the CD would be covering up the image.

I like the back page on this flat plan as it looks very organised all of the icons and important details are situated at the bottom of the page, along with the bar code, also the track listing is the centre of attention, which is most important. The front cover image is another close up of the artist I like it as the shot is a side view, also the hair is more controlled, I like this aspect as then the main focus is on the artist's face. Also I think the font really stands out, as is just below the centre of the page, also the hair on the artist does not distract the artist. The inside pages I decided to do an image of The Downs, so the image could of been a still or a preview to the music video. I decided against it as I thought it showed no storyline.

This flat plan is the final design of how I want my digipak to look, I feel that all the camera shots that will be taken work well together. The only slight alterations I might make is to give the front cover image a themed background that would consist of fields or cliffs.



Here is a link to my finished digipak the inside and outside pages:






Evaluation
The artists mainly female audience like the album as it has her trademark font and the style compliments her muscial style. The font is gold lettering that stands out well on the background of the artist and the trees, to gain the font I used PhotoShop to import it, as I drew the font out by hand. I used my own image used as it clearly shows the artist, the forest like background, as it gives a hint of what the style the album is going for. I edited colour strength on the trees, as it was too fierce and was drew attention away from the artist. The back cover looks quite professional, as changing the brightness of the background to transparent black, gives a shadowed effect, against the trees. Throughout the digipak I have chosen to use the same shade of gold on the font, as the colour, is a trademark font associated with Ellie Goulding, this is important to keep the product having originality. The left inside page I chose to position the artist in a field with a guitar as I thought it would give an idea to state the type of environment the artist is shown in. The green shades are effective as they balance out well against the guitar and the person, so they look important, and the main attraction on the image. The opposite page, I have curved the lettering, so it looks like the position of where the CD will be place, is the centre of attention. When I was creating the lettering, I had trouble positioning it as the shape of it is awkward, as I imported the font in myself. Overall a time consuming process to make the final piece, research, planning and developing it. To gain some inspiration I looked at existing digipaks, this is when I decided that I wanted to keep the structure simple. Using the planning and researching helped me to develop how I wanted the final product to look. By using a flat plans it allowed me to explore different ideas, and to gain opportunities to be creative.

Feedback

The general feedback that I received via Facebook on the front and back pages was that the back cover looks professional and is effective, the text used has been mentioned that it works well with the background. The general style has been mentioned by someone that it represents the artist and genre really well. Some people have given some constructive thoughts, that the image on the front page the person could of been looking more directly towards the camera.

The feedback received from the inside pages, the general conclusion was that someone really liked the effect of using handwritten text, as it gives a personal touch from the artist. Where I photoshopped image there has been criticism, as you can see that I did not edit the image properly. Also somebody likes that the font has been curved so it shows there is a space for the CD to be placed.

Shooting Diaries

10/01/11: In our first session of filming, we filmed in Seaford for two days to take shots of down the salts, which was filming Jess singing on the swings. We stayed round Jess's house to maximise the amount of filming we could do. We found it a challenge to set up the tripod, as some of the locations we filmed were uneven or on a slant. We found it easy to film the actual shots, as the we were lucky with the weather conditions. I was mainly incharge of being the director, Jess was mainly the actress apart from filming a few establishing shots, and Alex was mainly in charge of the filming.

17/01/11: For our next session I filming we went to Polegate and Eastbourne where we filmed the shots in the woods and on Eastbourne Pier. Again the filming took place over two days, we stayed at Alex's house to maximise the amount of footage we could gain, we ended up with more footage then we actually needed. We had to come with some choreography, as me and Alex had to do some dancing in pyjamas. we found this hysterical as we could not keep a straight face as it was slightly embarrassing. I took part in gaining some footage, also I directed less as I was a dancer in some shots. Alex filmed less, and took part in some of the shots, whereas Jess filmed more footage, as she had to film me and Alex in some shots.


After the two occasions that we filmed we went to lesson and captured the footage by using final cut pro and express, so we able to get an idea of the progress of the filming to see if the quality is any good. This became useful as we discovered a problem with the playground scenes, and decided we needed to reshoot some shots in Seaford.

02/02/11: We went to Lewes town to film shots, this only took an hour to film as we only had three or four shots to film. This was quick as the shots were quite simple so they only took two ot three takes each.

15/02/11: We shot scenes in Seaford again to reshoot some footage as we had problems with the previous footage, this took place over two days to make sure we got all the shots again, we also filmed shots situated in the graveyard.

14/03/11: For the final session of filming we had trouble finding a person that was willing to take part as each person filing the video had already taken part. So we went to Seaford to film the 'bedroom' scenes, as we needed shots of Jess and Jack acting. Jess was the central character, whereas Jack was the supporting actor, while Alex was filming the shots, and I was in charge of sorting out the music for Jess to mime to and directing.

The day after we filmed we went to lesson and successfully captured our footage and was able to edit the footage.